Third Year Students’ Appreciation for the following poems
Smell
of Nature
Blackened minds, Hardened hearts
Thickened Sweetness, weakened affection
All got healed
At the moment breeze pressed
Its lips on my chest …
All got healed
When the second dews swung
On the eyelashes of my iced eyes
All got healed
When the time streams melodized
Nearer to the ears of my wearied heart
Whiteness of love, purity of mercy,
Revolve the minute since I smelled the nature.
- A.R.
Rilmiyas
The
Isolated Heart
My innocent conscience ever feels
Putting the heart aside and
Not to be disturbed by the sounds…
Oh yeah the heart is hers….
The fated memories she ever gave
Is the sweetest moment I ever have….
Seclusion is my companion that never hurts
All around me surrounds with suffer
Deluding her dead images to my deaf life….
She perished me and vanished my love
Still my poor heart pours its blood to color her sprit….
All I want goes nothing but a thing
“My breath wants to end up
Knowing whether my beloved breaths my memories”
- A.R. Rilmiyas
THE ISOLATED HEART
The title of the poem straightly draws the reader to the theme, failure in love. The tone of the poem and the usage of suitable words and adjectives and the technique of first person narration all make full of pathos on the writer. Though it is in structure of only in the number of lines, but it is sonnet without any rhyme scheme. The writer sums up the theme in last two lines.
SMELL OF NATURE
The poet symbolically addresses the title to support the theme of the poem. The writer uses some poetic devices such as metaphor and repetitive lines. By using some nature elements the writer compares his painful feelings under the poetic technique metaphor, for instance “the second dews swung on the eyelashes of my iced eyes”. Then the writer tries to convey the message of revolution in society after the war, first two lines show the narrow minds of people, then finally he shows the freedom of life.
- Miss. M. G. Ravajara
THE ISOLATED HEART
The title of the poem straightly draws the reader to the theme, failure in love. The tone of the poem and the usage of suitable words and adjectives and the technique of first person narration all make full of pathos on the writer. Though it is in structure of only in the number of lines, but it is sonnet without any rhyme scheme. The writer sums up the theme in last two lines.
SMELL OF NATURE
The poet symbolically addresses the title to support the theme of the poem. The writer uses some poetic devices such as metaphor and repetitive lines. By using some nature elements the writer compares his painful feelings under the poetic technique metaphor, for instance “the second dews swung on the eyelashes of my iced eyes”. Then the writer tries to convey the message of revolution in society after the war, first two lines show the narrow minds of people, then finally he shows the freedom of life.
- Miss. M. G. Ravajara
SMELL OF NATURE.
This poem is describing about The Nature and also his hatred of love. Title of this poem "smell of Nature” is easy to understand from the title, because, at the time Poem is making the reader to understand about the poem. Theme of this poem is: "the poet expressing the failure of love with nature" Life isn't stable. love and nature also same as life. Because both are not stable also we can't see any simile in this poem. Techniques are very rarely used in this poem. but his approaches are v pathetic. "When the second dews swung “this line is reflecting the short duration of life. Whiteness of love, purity of mercy these lines are trying to talk about sudden changes of a life and nature.
Most exhilarating of all human emotion is probably nature's beautiful way of keeping the human in love. The poet loves the nature like the love. Love can be short term or long term relationship and how feelings change throughout the lifetime of a relationship. From this poem the writer is trying to portray about the nature and love. Both are not stable. People want their love relationship to be stable. They want their profound love to remain constant at its initial profound level but, we cannot guarantee our self when we think about a person's mentality.
-Miss. S.M. Shahnas
This poem is describing about The Nature and also his hatred of love. Title of this poem "smell of Nature” is easy to understand from the title, because, at the time Poem is making the reader to understand about the poem. Theme of this poem is: "the poet expressing the failure of love with nature" Life isn't stable. love and nature also same as life. Because both are not stable also we can't see any simile in this poem. Techniques are very rarely used in this poem. but his approaches are v pathetic. "When the second dews swung “this line is reflecting the short duration of life. Whiteness of love, purity of mercy these lines are trying to talk about sudden changes of a life and nature.
Most exhilarating of all human emotion is probably nature's beautiful way of keeping the human in love. The poet loves the nature like the love. Love can be short term or long term relationship and how feelings change throughout the lifetime of a relationship. From this poem the writer is trying to portray about the nature and love. Both are not stable. People want their love relationship to be stable. They want their profound love to remain constant at its initial profound level but, we cannot guarantee our self when we think about a person's mentality.
-Miss. S.M. Shahnas
THE ISOLATED HEART
This is poem about love. The situation of this poem is that the speaker does not want to forget his loved one’s memories even after she went away leaving behind him.
The title of the poem ‘the isolated heart’ is appropriate to this poetry. Ti symbolically indicates a man who is given up by his loving one.
He wants to keep her memories forever. He does not want to be disturbed even by his sound of heart thinking about her. Thus, he wants to put the heart aside. But he could not do that as he considers his heart as hers. Here he exaggeratedly expresses his love. To the poet the days with her were sweetest moments that he ever had. The adjective ‘sweetest’ express how he loves her. Now he is lonely without her. Here he ironically says that this loneliness never hurts him.
Even after she went from him his heart always wishes for her for the goodness.
The technique of personification and exaggeration is used in the line “still my poor heart pours its blood to color her spirit….”.
This poem is in first person narration and the tone is pathetic. The language simple. The structure of a poem seems to be in sonnet form. But it does not fill the rules of the sonnet.
The last two lines sum up the themes which are expressing his everlasting love. Even in his last breath he wants to keep her memories in his heart.
The poet tries to show the true and pure love via this poem to the readers.
SMELL OF NATURE.
This is the poem which tells about how nature influences on human mind. In other words this poem tells about the positive effect of nature on men’s attitude. Further this poem seems to be emphasizing the bond between men and nature. It is romantic poetry.
The title is relevant to this poem. It indicates how nature gives happiness and peace in our mind when we keep touch with it. There is technique of personification in this title which is poet gives smell to nature.
The speaker’s mind is blacked before he feels the value of nature. Sweetness and affection within him. But all get cured when the breeze touches his chest. The speaker gets rid of those negative attitudes when he saw the dewdrops. Further when the speaker’s heart hears the time streams melody, all negative thoughts are gone away. There are a lot of adjectives used in this poem such as ‘blackened minds’, ‘hardened hearts’, ‘thickened sweetness’ and weakened affection.
The technique of personification is used in this poem. The poet gives lips to the breeze and ears to the hearts. The language of this poetry is simple. These poems celebrate the happy tone.
The last two lines express the theme effectively. The attitude the speaker mind is filled with full of love and mercy. The words ‘whiten of love’ and ‘purify of nature’ shows the impact of nature in the mind of men.
The poet tries to show the power value and peaceful effect of nature in human mind through this poem.
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Miss. A.L. Shifa
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